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[hider=Luna Woodland][center][h1][color=440e62]Luna Woodland[/color][/h1]
[color=440e62][i]LuLu[/i][/color][hr][hr][img]https://media.giphy.com/media/I54TaF5TgR2nK/giphy.gif[/img]

"[color=440e62]Be yourself, there are enough copies[/color]"[hr][hr]
[/center][center][h3][color=440e62]For the Record[/color][/h3]
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[color=440e62]║ Name ║[/color]
[indent]Luna Olivia Woodland[/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Birthday & Age ║[/color]
[indent]September 16th, 1999 ( 17 years old) [/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Gender & Sexual Orientation ║[/color]
[indent]Female, Open Minded / Bi-curious[/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Other Labels ║[/color]
[indent]Weirdo, Vampire (Cause she is pretty pale), Freak. ( Not really things she likes but most of the time this is what people will say from her most likely)[/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Occupation ║[/color]
[indent]Unemployed[/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Appearance ║[/color]
[indent]Luna is a pretty pale girl with white-blond hair (dyed). She is used to be called a freak and tries not to care too much, she has her own style. She is not perse a goth or something, she just likes to be different. Further more she wears a pair of simple silver earrings.

What is always changing about her are the colors of her eyes: She wears color contacts and she has several different colors.[/indent]
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[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Z6NcdYRs7Y]Stop, I'm already dead[/url][/center][hr][hr][center][h3][color=440e62]At First Glance[/color][/h3][/center]
[color=440e62]║ Personality ║[/color] 
[indent][color=440e62]The Positive:[/color]
[list]
[*] Friendly
[*] Kind
[*] Ready to help at all time
[/list][/indent]

[indent][color=440e62]The Negative:[/color]
[list]
[*] On her own
[*] Stubborn
[*] Quiet
[/list][/indent]

[indent][color=440e62]What You See:[/color]
Luna is, when you really know her and looked past her shield of quietness and such a very fun loving girl that likes to laugh. She is not really a group person but get her one on one and she will be the best listener you've ever met![/indent]

[indent][color=440e62]What I Know:[/color]

Luna is a very creative girl. She loves to craft tiny buy also big things and this is also why she is a little on her own. She works better that way. People will know this later on but she will keep it quiet at first as she is used to getting laughed at for her way of looking at the world[/indent]

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[center]"[color=440e62]Don't judge a fish on his climbing skills[/color]" - [color=lightgray]Albert Einstein[/color][/center][hr][hr][center][h3][color=440e62]Off the Record[/color][/h3][/center]

[color=440e62]║ My Dreams ║[/color]
[indent]Her main goal in life is to start up her own business where she crafts all sort of things.[/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Fears ║[/color]
[indent][list]
[*] The dark
[*] Spiders (like, the really big ones)
[*] Small spaces
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[color=440e62]║ Likes ║[/color]
[indent][list]
[*] Sitting alone
[*] Crafting
[*] Colors
[*] Painting
[*] Day Dreaming
[/list][/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Dislikes ║[/color]
[indent][list]
[*] Crowded places
[*] People asking stupid questions
[*] Popular kids
[*] Being put in the center of attention
[/list][/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Brief History ║[/color]
[indent] Luna was born in new york city, she had a great childhood and was always let free in what she wanted by her parents. This all ended when her parents died in a car accident. She was placed under the care of her mothers sister and so she moved to Westworth.

She moved there when the summer break just had started, this was done by purpose so she had some extra time getting used to the new place and the people. Luna has always been a bit of a loner but because of recent activities in her life, she became more of a loner and during summer she didn't really try to make friends or so.[/indent]
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[color=440e62]║ Extra Curricular Activities & Sports ║[/color]
[indent]Luna sits a lot at the library and so she decided to start helping out there after school for a few hours.[/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Reputation ║[/color]
[indent]Luna doesn't really have a reputation yet[/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Best subjects, Worst subjects ║[/color]
[indent]|Luna is good at Art, Chemistry and English. She sucks at Sport[/indent]

[color=440e62]║ Extra information ║[/color]
Fresh Meat xD lol ...[/hider]
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Hello!

First off, I love your faceclaim! I have her in my reserves to use for a character someday as well. Looking at your character sheet, I would say that all around the personality and history sections are a little bit short. If you could, please add a little bit more depth to these sections. Free Pass is a high casual style roleplay, IC posts tend to be on the lengthier side, so the GM team likes to see strong, detailed writing in our CS applications. Luna looks good so far, but really sell your character's personality to us! Also, how long ago was the crash/Luna's move to Westworth? We are trying to avoid having characters that are from out of town. Westworth is small, and our vision was to have a RP with a lot of close, longtime childhood friends engaging in highschool shenanigans. 

~ GM Silent