[@Blitz] No no my friend, thank you for giving me something to read. Hopefully, despite my claim to "dismal reviews" you found my judgment fair and constructive? If not please feel free to correct me, as these are after all merely opinions I have when reading. And don't be too disappointed, Every story after all, was good, none were flat out things I'd rip apart easily. So I'd hope I could focus in on an aspect I thought could use some work or expanding, some narrative feedback if you will. And don't worry Writer's block happens to all of us. It just takes awhile to think of something. And even longer to find the motivation to write it out. So please don't take out of it any misconception that anyone failed to meet my standards, no all of the submitters did indeed impress me with their ideas and work. Just take my worthless two cents or leave it, I'm just one person with my ideas, so nothing is more important than find your own inspiration for a story to call your own. But either way, be proud of what you've made. It's good, but remember that you aren't alone in being good, and that everyone always strives for better :) I look forward to your next anonymous submission. Although it was pretty clear who wrote what after reading your review and having omitted yourself from a critique (yes I read what others have to say too, it's good practice to know what others think of the stories you read). And let's see if I can pick up on the nuances of your writing style so the next time.