[quote=@Zapdos] Yeah, Ao is the guy I meant. Why would you advise against it? I was thinking of using a Byakugan medical ninja of some sort, but I might think of something else instead. Should be a fun roleplay to be in, anyway. [/quote] Well, actually, I like the idea and all. I once played a game where my Hyuuga Character had her eye dug out of it's socket while she was still alive for something similar. After being pwned by an enemy during a mission, one of her own teammates, who was training to be a Medic, snatched her eye to use for himself and left her there to die. That was a particularly dark Naruto RP. The reason I advice against it is that we don't want the place littered with KG. If you do decide to make that character, it wouldn't keep me from accepting it, if it is acceptable, but I'd rather see characters without a KG (even if it is a stolen one). [quote=@caliban22] Looks really good I will at least throw the ole hat into the ring. [/quote] If you get tired of your old hat, I can make you a new one :newlol (lame name joke) [@LordVoldemort] [hider=Koichi review] I do have a slight issue with the fact that one of the techniques you listed it from a [i]game[/i] and those are generally off-limits when it comes to ... anything but the game, but the technique you chose is so small and all that I'm cool with it. Goukakyuu is like a handshake to the Uchiha, so that [i]obviously[/i] had to be there. I am curious about him having two chakra natures, despite barely even bothering to train; a second nature transformation isn't something that you just simply learn. If he had an affinity towards fire, like most Uchiha do, then that would be easier for him to learn, but learning a second element, and even something as unpredictable as wind, would takes years and years of hard work. (Sasuke, because of plot-armor, was an exception because of his pure genius) Despite him not having any techniques for his Taijutsu/Kenjutsu, I would like for you to make a Style for it. It doesn't have to be much, just a slight description of how he fights since "brawling" is a wide term. Have a look at [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4312570]my sheet[/url] if you want to see what I mean (since my baby is a Taijutsu/Kenjutsu specialist). Oh, and the code you want for your techniques is [noparse][url=Insert URL here]Name of the Technique[/url][/noparse] [/hider]