[quote=@Silent Observer]
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Hello!

First off, I love your faceclaim! I have her in my reserves to use for a character someday as well. Looking at your character sheet, I would say that all around the personality and history sections are a little bit short. If you could, please add a little bit more depth to these sections. Free Pass is a high casual style roleplay, IC posts tend to be on the lengthier side, so the GM team likes to see strong, detailed writing in our CS applications. Luna looks good so far, but really sell your character's personality to us! Also, how long ago was the crash/Luna's move to Westworth? We are trying to avoid having characters that are from out of town. Westworth is small, and our vision was to have a RP with a lot of close, longtime childhood friends engaging in highschool shenanigans. 

~ GM Silent
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Hi there!

Thanks for looking into Luna and cool that you love the faceclaim (It was a idea of Nallore cause I was kinda not able to choose between two) I changed the history and personality section a bit, like adding when her parents died and I've made her less fresh meat :)  I hope that the CS is now good for approval :D  If not, please tell me so I can change it ^^