The CS is OK except that, for a charcater whose gender is unclear or can't be categorized, IT is used not THEY. THEY is used for plurar and I guess your CS is about a single invidual.

As for the Zenohunt stuff datadoggie will say yes or no, it is his race after all.

Altrough I will accept the CS as it is, it would really nice from you to reform your CS into the standard form used on this RP. You can list your gear under Other.