Thanks [@Terminal]. I found myself thinking the same thing, especially once you mentioned it. I probably should have by rights, stuck with what I knew. Or rather, what I didn't know? Either way, lesson learned. Don't submit unfinished work! And thanks to the other reviewers who took time to read what I wrote and share their opinions. I'll be waiting to take another crack at the next contest for certain!

-The Authour of In-Between-Box. :)