[@Buddha] And here is the edited version. Please tell me your thoughts for anything that still need correction, as I'm pretty sure there will be some mistakes somewhere - especially because I'm editing it by cellphone [s]and in the middle of class that i felt like ignoring[/s]. [hider=Souma Uzuki] [CENTER][h1]Souma Uzuki[/h1] ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— [IMG]http://s1.zerochan.net/600/41/47/1974891.jpg[/IMG] [hider=Extra] Battle Attire: [IMG]http://s1.zerochan.net/600/39/34/1419239.jpg[/IMG] Casual: [IMG]https://pbs.twimg.com/media/CdhJ9ZUUMAQ7RgD.jpg[/IMG] [/hider] ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— [h3]Personalia[/h3] [sub]Information collected by the census office of Amegakure[/sub] [I]“Geez. Such a bother”[/I][/CENTER] [INDENT]| Birthname: | [INDENT][I]Uzuki Souma[/I][/INDENT] | Nicknames: | [INDENT][I]Nanashi (No Name); Sword-Style Thief; Battle Addict; Lazy Monster[/I][/INDENT] | Alias: | [INDENT][I]Crescent Moon Devil[/I][/INDENT] | Sex: | [INDENT][I]Male[/I][/INDENT] | Age: | [INDENT][I]24[/I][/INDENT] | Birthplace: | [INDENT][I]Konohagakure no Sato (Hidden Leaf Village)[/I][/INDENT] | Bloodline: | [INDENT][I]Unknown Bloodline[/I][/INDENT] | Rank: | [INDENT][I]Jounin[/I][/INDENT] | Reputation: | [INDENT][I] If asked to describe him, most of his acquaintances would resume his very being as "A lazy bastard with a monstrous talent for cutting anything that stands in his way", and that would be quite the accurate description for him. He is mostly recognized as an individual that shouldn't be messed up with yet can't be taken seriously, being overall seen as someone befitting of being called as a Wildcard. Most of Souma's [s]in[/s]fame came from either the assassination of known jounin before he was even recognized as a chunnin or from the fearsome reputation he created for himself while traveling as a mercenary - a direct result of his prefference for taking absurdly difficult requests - Such as the elimination of a whole bandid group in the country of iron - for relatively low rewards as long as it suited his weird sense of righteousness - something that he developed in answer to his hate for the hypocrisy of the big villages. The fact that he continuously stoped to defy and defeat every single person that "carried a sword and looked strong" he found in his travels as a way of sharpening his skills with the sword may have played an equally big role tho.[/I][/INDENT][/INDENT] [CENTER]————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— [h3]Psychology & History[/h3] [sub]From detailed inspection and investigation by Black Ops and medical personnel[/sub] [I]“Do you really need to bother me right now? I was planning to sleep.”[/I][/CENTER] [INDENT]| Personal biography: | [INDENT][I]The start of the story of the young adult known as Souma is far from being uncommon or special, being shared by many others through the years since the start of the ninja era: He was an orphan. While this statement may seem a bit simple, it does resumes his youth perfectly in despite of being a simple word. He was nothing but an orphan like any other, abandoned at birth by parents that probably felt that leaving him behind would be safer - or maybe never cared for him, he couldn't know (Or care) - Souma was raised on Konoha's orphanage for most of his infancy, being regarded as an overall quiet child who hardly interacted with others or have any problem by most of his former caretakers - quite the accurate description, considering that he wasn't especially remarkable back then - but that would quickly change after his entrance in the academy. If asked now, he'd hardly know what exactly made him such an abnormal individual, but one thing was certain: it started in the academy. He doesn't know, even today, what exactly awakened his instincts in that place, but he know for certain that it happened in an instant: The quiet kid that he was back then instantly changed into one of the most promising future ninjas and undoubtedly the most troublesome one, being regarded as mischievous, lazy, fun loving individual and, above all, ridiculously talented individual. Thinking deeply, the root of this sudden change was most certainly the person that started his training - and initiated him into the ways of a scoundrel - His foster father, Hayato Uzuki. If asked to describe him, Souma would most certainly choose the words "Carefree yet Sharp", two seemingly unrelated adjectives that undoubtedly suited the man to an abnormal extent: Hayato was as much of a genius as Souma himself, being regarded as the strongest sword user in the whole village before he even reached his thirties - a man that loved the sword as much as he loved fun and imparted the same values in the youth that he loved as a son. With all of that being said, it's hard to understand how Souma, that earned such a good life, managed to turn into an fool that rushed to join a war torn country before he even managed to get his first girlfriend - an understandable doubt that will be erased by the events that followed the quiet period of the boy's life. It all started to crumble when he received the worst notice of his life at the age of 15 - six months before his chunnin exam: His father, Hayato Uzuki, had died by the hands of a member of the Shinobi organization of an allied, assassinated without a chance to react due to a stupid grudge held by the young swordsman. The worst part? He wasn't caught. Due to the alliance made between Konohagakure and the other village, the criminal was forgiven with just minor punishments for the sake of "not damaging the allied military forced even more". No need to say that, to the boy that only had Hayato as family from the very start, this was the highest treason possible. For the next month, the carefree smile that was often seen in the boy's face completely vanished, giving place to a gloomy expression and even gloomier attitude. This quickly changed in the following two months tough, as the boy gradually returned to his former self with some small changes: His eyes had a sharp gleam now, and his carefree smile gave a predatorial feel that only intensified with the passage of the months. By the time of his chunnin exam - that happened in conjunction with the allied village as a way of sealing the treaty - the boy had already changed into a different yet similar person: The sheath that once covered his true self - his "blade" - was now a thing in the past. The first stages were so ridiculously easy for the boy that they almost felt like a joke. It was more than clear for him that, had they been in war times, he could already be a jounin with his level of proficiency, but at the moment it didn't matter. His only priority was getting the right spot in the finals - something that was easily done through having contact with one of the responsibles for the event. His target? It was obviously his father's killer daughter, a fairly talented boy around his age that the killer of his father regarded as being even more important than his own life. It isn't hard to predict what happened next: Souma toyed with the girl to an unbelievable extent without even revealing his Kekkei Genkai, trapping the spawn of his enemy in a way reminiscent of a cat playing with the rat held under his paws until the father of the poor mice couldn't hold back his anger anymore, stepping into the arena to stop the fight. The result? He finally used his Kekkei Genkai - something that he discovered months ago but never had the opportunity to show to anyone, as he was waiting for his foster father to return home before making the reveal - taking the unsuspecting jounin by surprise and, consequently, managing to behead the man in front of his son before he could react to his attack with a smile in his face - for the first time in the last six months, he truly felt alive. Of course the story couldn't end like this, and he was captured by the Shinobi of his village and escorted to face judgement for his sins - a laughable display of fake righteousness orchestrated by the same guys that forgave the man who killed his father. That being said, the hypocrisy of this specific judgement favoured Souma in the end, freeing him under minor punishments due to the potential he had to turn into a strong force for the village - an effort that ended up being for naught, as the boy sneaked away from the village in the following weeks, assuming the identity of a wanderer. For the following 5 years, Souma lived as a wanderer - using his status as a neutral party to travel through most of the world in his search for perfecting his technique. He relied mostly in working as a mercenary ninja, serving for who paid more while using his free time to collect new techniques of handling the sword and having fun in the process. This lifestyle maintained itself until 2 years ago, when a woman who called himself as the shadow of the rain (Amekage) stopped him, praising his skills - that earned quite the fame through his 5 years as a merc - and requesting him to join her not as a Mercernary but as her loyal retainer - an attempt of recruiting him that relyed solely in the supposed honor he had as a swordsman - request to which he replied with an answer befitting of his personality: "Sure, if you manage to beat me I can do that." And an extra comment that would bring pride to his foster father: "But if I win, you're going to be my wife". The result? He's still single and is now one of Amegakure's jounin under the command of the woman he swore to follow. [/I][/INDENT] | Family biography: | [INDENT][I]Being an abandoned orphan, Souma never had - and never had any special desire to - the opportunity of meeting his parents. His foster father, however, was a member of the Uzuki family, a family known for their attainments in the use of the Konoha-Ryu, and naturally had some blood ties that still live in Konoha - Albeit none that Souma cared about enough to meet after leaving the village.[/I][/INDENT] | Family ties: | [INDENT] [I][I]Hayato Uzuki | Foster Parent | 32 by the time of his death, Konohagakure, Former Shinobi and the man responsible for Souma's love for the way of the sword.[/I][/I] [/INDENT] | Dreams and fears: | [INDENT][I]Souma isn't the kind of guy to think deeply about the future, having the sole objective of enjoying his life while continuously enhancing his sword style. His biggest fear is being sealed or imprisoned mainly due to the implication having to stay alive without any opportunity of having fun.[/I][/INDENT][/INDENT] [CENTER]————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— [h3]Combat Reports[/h3] [sub]From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches[/sub] [I]“My speciality is cutting people until they stop moving. I can also cut animals and things though”[/I][/CENTER] [INDENT]| Fighting style: | [INDENT][I]Souma's fighting style is fairly direct, being mainly reliant on directly fighting the enemy at close range through the mixed use of his sword arts and Kekkei Genkai, overpowering anyone in his way through the use of a mix of his excessive speed and his masterful handling of swords. At long range, he mainly relies on the few long distance techniques he knows and shurikenjutsu to distract the attention of his foes and force them out of their hiding spots, giving him the opportunity of getting close to them and finishing the fight through the use of his sword.[/I][/INDENT] | Kekkei genkai - bloodline limit: | [INDENT][U]Kekkei genkai name[/U] [INDENT]Jinton - Speed[/INDENT] [U]Description[/U] [INDENT]Swift Release is a combined nature transformation kekkei genkai that can be used to move with instantaneous speed, granting the user an advantage over opponents with more strength than speed, such as users of Chakra Enhanced Strength. This nature therefore renders the user invulnerable against most taijutsu. It is unknown what elements this nature entails. This Kekkei Genkai mostly acts as a supplementary skill for Souma's use of Kenjutsu - field that he appears to favour to an abnormal extent.[/INDENT] [U]Strengths[/U] [INDENT]Souma mostly uses this Kekkei Genkai in conjunction to his sword techniques, giving him the opportunity of easily overpowering his enemies ay a close distance due to the absurd speed provided by it.[/INDENT] [U]Weaknesses[/U] [INDENT]Being only capable of short bursts of speed and failing to provide any form of long distance capacity, this Kekkei Genkai can be easily overpowered through the use of attrition tactics and long-range combat.[/INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] [INDENT]| Ninja techniques: | [INDENT][U]A rank techniques[/U] [INDENT][URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Blade_of_Wind] Blade of Wind[/URL] [URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hazy_Moon_Night] Hazy Moon Night[/URL] [URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Swift_Release:_Shadowless_Flight] Swift Release: Shadowless Flight[/URL][/INDENT] [U]B rank techniques[/U] [INDENT][URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Flying_Swallow] Flying Swallow[/URL] [URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Cloud-Style_Crescent_Moon_Beheading] Cloud Style: Crescent Moon Beheading[/URL] [URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Iai_Beheading] Iai Beheading[/URL] [URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Iaidō] Iaido[/URL][/INDENT] [U]C rank techniques[/U] [INDENT][URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Cloud-Style_Deception_Beheading] Cloud Style: Deception Beheading[/URL] [URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Dancing_Blade_Risk] Dancing Blade Risk[/URL] [URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Killing_Intent] Killing Intent[/URL][/INDENT] [U]D rank techniques[/U] [INDENT]N/A[/INDENT] [U]E rank techniques[/U] [INDENT][URL=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/E-rank] Academy Techniques[/URL][/INDENT][/INDENT] | Custom techniques: | [hider=Souma's Original: Cloudy Sky, Hidden Moon ] [INDENT][U]Jutsu name[/U] [INDENT]Souma's Original: Cloudy Sky, Hidden Moon[/INDENT] [U]Rank[/U] [INDENT]B[/INDENT] [U]Range[/U] [INDENT]Close Range[/INDENT] [U]Description[/U] [INDENT]A technique made from the observation of the Dance of the Crescent Moon technique - unreplicable by Souma due to him being unable to use the shadow clone technique - this technique relies on the most basic clone technique to create a sole clone overlapping with the user and then using the swift style to instantly move behind the enemy and behead they while they're distracted with the illusory clone.[/INDENT][/INDENT] [/hider] [hider=Souma's Original: Endless Moon] [INDENT][U]Jutsu name[/U] [INDENT]Souma's Original: Endless Moon[/INDENT] [U]Rank[/U] [INDENT]S[/INDENT] [U]Range[/U] [INDENT]Close-Medium Range[/INDENT] [U]Description[/U] [INDENT]A technique developed from mixing his swift style with the Iaido he learned through living with the Samurai, this monstrous skill uses the swift release to enhance the speed of the user's arms to an unbelievable extent for the span of three seconds, time that he uses to unleash up to 24 slashes coated with wind-based chakra, delivering an absurd damage not only to those directly in the range of the blade - that appears to be able to cut armour with an ease that can only be described as inhuman - but also to anyone directly behind them, as each cut produces a wind blade comparable to the wind release's Wind Cutter Technique. The main disadvantage of this technique is that, due to the absurd level of speed attained, it puts excessive strain in the user's arms, resulting in harsh consequences when used without restraint.[/INDENT][/INDENT] [/hider] | Weapons: | [hider=Violent Moon] [INDENT][U]Weapon name[/U] [INDENT]Violent Moon[/INDENT] [U]Weapon, tool, or object type[/U] [INDENT]Sword/Katana[/INDENT] [U]Description[/U] [INDENT]A simple looking Katana with an equally simple pitch black sheath, the only special characteristic of this weapon is it abnormal sharpness: A result of Souma's excessive use of chakra augmentation, that ended up permanently infusing the sharpness characteristic of his wind release into the blade.[/INDENT][/INDENT] [/hider][/INDENT] [/hider]