Haha I'm fond of gray morals and conflict. x3

Agreed, the characters need a chance to latch onto something, and especially to understand what's happening and how it affects them. That is exactly what's blocking me, haha. It's not enough to simply sweep the characters through the narrative -- the narrative should be structured around the characters' actions, should depend on their existence.

I'll go ahead and write, and see what happens. x3

Edit: jk I made a map instead. xD

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