[quote=@1Charak2] Looks good might wnat to add a indentation between the last line of the personality and the history though as that was hard to find where it ended and began. Accepted. [/quote] Will do. Is it okay if I adjust his number of wings btw? Originally I had intended him to be a new angel but due to adapting his backstory to fit Schwertleite's, he's been in the group for about four years now, and there are other people in the group who are newer but have more. I should also consider maybe rethinking his magic-based skillset, but since I'm tired and Johannes is a book-shy idiot, I'll forget about it for now. Also, I don't know if Johannes and Suisei will hate each other or be the bestest of bosom buddies, but I do know there is going to be some magnificent violence whenever those two team up xD