[quote=@Crimson Raven]
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Trying to pound out my long overdue post.

It is a pretty important part, and I'm trying to make to sound how I want, but it's difficult.
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I feel like asking if I could help, but don't really know where to start :/

But hopefully you figure out how to make it sound good as you expect, or at least close enough. Best of luck.