[@Riegal]: Putting aside how origin's kinda irrelevant in the context of the RP...

I don't... Think that the character needs to be edgy, per se? Semi-serious maybe, but not [i]edgy[/i] edgy.

The only question mark that pops up at the moment is the mention of 'heretical humans' there. I'm... Getting an idea as to how to parse that but I'm still kinda unsure as to what that represents.