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Nice, I have enough time before my shift starts to reply. I'll make edits later tonight.

I'll need more of an explanation on why Origins are irrelevant. I haven't read much Type-Moon related stuff in a while, and I don't know Grand Order as well as I know most other TM stuff, so I could be missing something obvious. Because she shows her origin outwardly far more strongly than normal, it's dictated much of her life's path. It's the reason why she's strong enough to be an Executor, as well as being her biggest weakness, so I thought it was worth as much of mention as it got while I was writing her.

The edgy comment was more off-hand and not serious haha. I agree, I don't think she's 'edgy' at all in terms of personality. Just, you know, I feel her backstory qualifies a bit, what with the whole 'seeing my family killed by my possessed father' as well as living the life of an Executor.

I was going for humans that the Church didn't like, basically. I'm imagining most of them being people getting themselves knowingly involved in demon-related activities.