[@The One] The physical ageing aspect seems unrealistic, in the context of no powers existing prior to this. Also the history of being raised by monks is a bit 'out there' for me. Although I didn't say it explicitly, the residents of the facility will have mostly led fairly normal lives up until now instead of something that feels a little mystical. Also, could you put the CS in a hider/spoiler? The image is large and might cause issues for people using RPG on mobile devices.