[quote=@The One]
[@Balthazar007] How's that?
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Everything was fine except the mentioning of the IQ test. You can allude to something akin to an IQ test, but the IQ test and IQ score as we know it was created in the early 1900's. That's more than 1000 years into the future of this RP. If you fix this, I will approve your character sheet.