Personally, I was gonna wait for Lucius to give his thoughts first and I was gonna give mines, but I'll give mines first. 

First [@Bishop] You have around 12 items all of which has some ability or does something and you haven't told how you got any of those items and haven't really put a personality down, I know it's self-explanatory, but all I'm getting is that your character is a dumb and ignorant guy that doesn't really learn. Add a personality so I can understand your character a little more and drop your items down from 12 to around 4 to 5. 

[@DracoLunaris] It's pretty good and nothing really needs to be changed. 

[@Dead Cruiser] Same thing pretty good, I like the character. 

[@Heckno12] A little short, but it's okay, I recommend adding more to that personality.