[@Hammerman]
It seems you've put a lot of thought into this, and there's a great deal of information that's great to have. However, I'd appreciate it if you could go onto more detail about her powers, format it more specifically to the character sheet, and possibly remove the light domain since it seems to not really fit. Please do keep in all the background stuff! Just keep in mind that we're going to be literally starting in a blank void so she'll need to create that order herself. 


[@rush99999]
Seems great! Though if you could go into a little more detail on what power he gains from revelry, I'd appreciate that.