[quote=@Innis]
Yes, there's just one problem with that; every time you write about Endar, you use his really name, which Alia can't know yet. Since the story is mostly in her perspective, that's the only way to show that what you're writing isn't from her perspective.
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Don't bother trying to write in the same style and perspective as your partner, it doesn't work. I've tried. As compromise I tend to make it *very* clear which character is doing what, which is a necessity in my own collab-heavy RP.