[quote=@pugbutter] I've been stuck on the history section for a while but yeah, I'm almost done too. [/quote] Like I mentioned over PM, and this applies to everyone else as well, I really don't mind vague histories, or histories that are a bit loosely defined. Just make sure they give a strong feeling of what kind of person your character is. [@FrozenEcstasy] Rad! I'll give you a more in depth critique tomorrow afternoon, but he's looking good from what I skimmed.