[@AngelBites15] I don't mind giving advice to those that ask for it, though I wouldn't know where to start. Would help posting examples of your work, so people can actually look at it. ^-^

Just merely skimming through several posts of a current 1x1 you are doing, you seemed to be using spellcheck. Simple but still a genuine compliment. It's better than the 20 plus advanced forums RP's I looked on. So you're already doing more than sizable chunk of the role-players here.

Also another compliment, is trying to find someone to improve your writing and tell you what you're doing right and what you could do better. Some people on this forum can't speak to you in a kind manner in a NORMAL sense. So you bet their the type of person that could never handle criticism. 

Though I will say, the best way to help someone improve their writing, is to ignore the writers strength and focus on their flaws. Unless you want them to review the book you wrote, and not just writing. Compliments don't tend to help anyone improve. (Nice for self esteem, but that's about it.) Unfortunately, I don't have enough to go on if I would attempt to criticize. And links to things you've wrote on here, would help. (I guess consider that my criticism.)

[@mentions work like this] You need the [ ] brackets to have it sent to those people in question. (consider that my advice. :3)