[quote=Chev] Oops. I posted before I saw that. I can have them leave and let the titans deal with the after effects of what they did though. I'll try and edit my post.EDIT...And I just saw that Sinna's father lives in Eden. Crap. [/quote] Tis all good... And yeah, He does... as does her sister since they are the cliche rich family lol xD [quote=Mike the Bloodwolf] I was going to explain the explosion in the next post, though looking at it after the post. I should do some alteration to it myself as for Free to low casual. Honestly, I want to leave the free rp section, too many one liners and plots that happen too fast so I'm never ever sure about what I'm doing [/quote] That wasn't really a good idea. Things like that are major things and if leaves the reader questioning "How, why and when?" than it might need some explaining then and there... I also suggest again that you read everyone's posts and do a compare and contrast between our posts and yours if you really want to break away from free. Remember, quality. Contribute in some way, shape and form in the IC, give off explanations for simple things (like the explosion and what happened in the fight)...