[@Pulserix] Okay, first thing: could you please not post unaccepted characters in the char tab? 

Second thing... the grammar and level of detail there just doesn't seem appropriate for casual whatsoever. I'm sorry, but that's just [i]not[/i] acceptable. I have more detail in the skeleton I have for if PC's have some direct involvement with the Emperor than that entire bio. And even if it might be acceptable in theory it... seems entirely insufficient to paint a clear picture.

I also have several reservations about how coherent that background even is. Simply put... it has the Dominion conscripting for a war they aren't involved in, fleeing the Dominion by heading to said war, and seeking refuge in a place... with a Thalmor agent. This is not something that can hold together.