[@Kafka Komedy] At minimum because you have a Tier 4 ability for this character, this character needs to at very least be Tier 3. Quintessence, speaking of abilities, is too poorly defined; in what ways does it approve the ability to attack or defend? Why is it so potent as a Tier 4 ability, something that would be on the same grounds as a [i]Teleport without Error[/i] spell or [i]Power Word: Stun[/i] spell. No less, "luck" as a mechanic needs to be defined better - do they just seem to avoid danger more efficiently? Do they seem to find treasure often? Do they never seem to get sick or tired? Aether itself needs added definition, in how does it work? Where does it come from? How does one harness it? Can it be bottled and used as a physical resource as it seems to imply, or it is more akin to something like [i]qi[/i] or generalized magic? Until these questions are elaborated on, I cannot approve this character.