[quote=@Member 00492] Under my notes for all the CS's I have for your girl... "needs edits in Exp and BRIEF Bio" Maximum experience in the RP is 90 days, and a month of that's been with Batman, and at least two weeks before that was with Matt before he was killed. As far as BRIEF Bio, I know people can get passionate about a character and I get it. However for a Casual level RP no more than three paragraphs. I've got five other CS's to go over again before taking another look at yours if you wanna make those couple of edits. Other than that I really liked the character. -00492 [/quote] If you want it that brief I can certainly oblige. Though I must ask does that mean you want it cut down to three paragraphs of important events or you just want three paragraphs encompassing the most important moments and I can still include some lesser but still relevant past stuff as part of her character which goes unmentioned till the RP calls for it in IC?