[quote=@Prince of Seraphs]
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If you want it that brief I can certainly oblige. Though I must ask does that mean you want it cut down to three paragraphs of important events or you just want three paragraphs encompassing the most important moments and I can still include some lesser but still relevant past stuff as part of her character which goes unmentioned till the RP calls for it in IC?
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Three paragraphs encompassing the most important moments and you can still include some lesser but still relevant past stuff as part of her character. Or you could just jot a couple notes down in the Notes section if you feel it's that important. But shorter bios are a must when I've got... eleven CS's now total to go back over. It's why I rarely stray to Advanced unless I'm just really feeling it. 

-00492