[@Aquanthe]
[@Zeroth]
[@LordVoldemort]

I really think your characters are good to go, but if you want other inputs you can wait for [@Solace] to arrive.

[@Kazemitsu] There's a couple of things wrong with your sheet. Firstly, I would prefer it if you changed your character's picture. He's all clad in armor and it's hard to get a good picture of him. Also, your personality kind of clashes. If he's blunt and things of the sort, he can't be nice at the same time. Thirdly, your grammar and sentence structure is kind of off. You should proofread it! :)

Also, I wouldn't make your characters [i]too[/i] old, as there will probably be a skip later on.