[@Old Amsterdam] A couple typos, no doubt a result of you doing everything from your phone. Just pointing them out.
[quote]She almost always carries a little stuffed bunny or bear with her, [b]banned[/b] Bun Bun and Brownie respectively.[/quote]
[quote]She found the [b]PART[/b] headquarters[/quote]
[quote]and she desperately wanted to join and escape get life to become a hero and help.[/quote]

Not a huge deal, just something I thought I'd point out. I know how much of a bane autocorrect can be. In terms of legitimate criticism, the skills section hasn't been touched, so that's a pretty big concern. I'd also like to see the power classified as a shifter/brute subcategory, but I can easily let that go for the dark history that it looks like you put a fair amount of work into. 

So other than fixing skills, I'd say she's all set. Let me know when that's done and I'll give the final look over.