I have a few issues... First off, let me start, breaking the forth wall, [i]is not[/i] an option here, the [i]only[/i] Exception is the child of Deadpool- in this case, Vicier has this child, and is in the process of making it. I understand you do forget things in posts, but this: "To show what he was talking about, he picked up his suitcase (that went unmentioned earlier, but was totally there the whole time) and opened it up" Could easily have been written like this: "To show what he was talking about, he picked up his suitcase, [b]from where he had left it earlier[/b], and opened it up." [hr][hr] Second, I know this is casual, and that while it is still considered laid back, I moved this casual because I wanted more skill, and quality to posts. I'm so proud of those that came here with me from the old roleplay, and I'm looking forward to see the advancement they have. I'd like to see everyone grow a bit in posting, even myself- I've come a long way in under a year, and I've still got a long way to come. [hr][hr] Thirdly, While we are working on a Bruce post, I'd like a majority of characters posted in, and all of mine and my Co-GMs. I'd like everyone to have a chance to have their characters introduced before this so do keep in mind that the students will be at the front gates until this happens. and be wary of the time- not a great amount of time is passing at the moment. [hr][hr] And finally... "the best group in the RP currently and I will fight you if you say otherwise" I will fight anyone who does this sort of thing again. Yes, I know it might be funny and everything, but it is [i]disrespectful[/i] to others. To every other writer in the roleplay, and that is a big no no for me. I will not have disrespect. I will not have people feeling like they aren't making a good enough character to be considered for "the best group". [hr][hr] If you have any concerns, please do not hesitate to come to me.