[quote=@Expolar] It's a bit late where I am so I'll be off soon. Ya, in the future I was thinking to do one or two things with Caelum. Curious about those ideas? After reading through the CS, it seems okay. But If I had to nitpick, I would say to try changing the name of the magic. I'm aware that it is not like dragon slayer magic. The name also fits the description. But I suppose I'm afraid that it may confuse a fee people that haven't read or seen the magic being used. [/quote] I can see that, I kinda wanted to do it that way for that reason, but I'll change it if needs be. [@Crimson Raven] I have been away from role playing for a while, so I am a bit rusty, and for sure not happy with my own draft. I welcome some constructive criticism.