[@Dark Light] Okay, a few things - you have as a fear - Being out in the black - how is that going to play out? Fears are things that truly drive a person to distraction or even mad. Make them beyond on edge. So if he gets on a ship, how is he going to cope with that? And claustrophobia? 

Also - you have space for one more special skill but since you have drawing/tattoo - divide those up to fill the empty space since they are two different specialties in this case. (I know plenty of people who can draw but will hamburger the fuck out of you if you let them tat you. ><!)

And - Under personal style and personality - it has to be a minimal of 2 paragraphs - you will need to expand there a bit. (About triple of what you currently have. Two good paragraphs. Style, can talk about things other than clothing, hair and jewelry is included, as well as beard maintenance - Just ask Foy lol) - Personality gets to the nitty gritty of a person.

Then - Under items - you have spots left under on person and quarters - you may want to expand those - remember if it isn't listed, he won't have it. With that beard he will need grooming items and such, at least until he meets Foy lol

Under Reason For Why you Joined The Side You Did - need expanding on that as well. Remember, 1 decent paragraph. (More than just two sentences as it were. 

Think that covers it from first glance - go ahead and make the edits and then tag me when you are done. (Though I might suggest taking on some form of fighting - if he is a freeloader and a gambler, chances are he has gotten into a few fights. If he doesn't have anything like that, next time someone flips a table and goes at him, he's going to be like 1st grader going up against Ronda Rousey. It ain't gonna be pretty lol.