[@Jiatsu Hoshido]Maybe if you clean the thread starter up a little bit? Put the summary at the top instead of dumping all your Lore on players from the get go. [@tsukune] built a really awesome [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/153116-the-art-beauty-of-bbcoding-complete/ooc]thread[/url] on BBcoding and polishing up your posts. [@LadyA] has some great [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/137477-lady-as-templates-for-use/ooc]stuff[/url] as well, but I think that's more for Character sheets. Good luck!