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Hey thanks! I'm sorry I can't remember if we rped together.>.< I got a horrible memory 

Edit: rough draft of the cs!


Name: Lach (Lock) The Blood Samurai 

Age: 23

Birthday: November, 15th

Magic: Magic Slayer: his families blood has been tainted by a powerful anti-Magic spell known as Magic Slayer, Its sole purpose is to negate all magical power. Those around him, in a close proximity, can still use magic. Although the longer they stay around him it becomes harder for them to use their magic. How ever, if he gets any of his blood on them, he can cancel their magic all together. 


Magic Level: A

History: Lock was born into a family that was descended from clan dedicated to hunting wizards. Long before Zeref, before magic was accepted as normal. There were people who were afraid of all wizards, and dedicated themselves to eradicate them, ironically with a magic spell that tainted their very blood. Dangerous and effective as they were, they were defeated and fled the country. 

He grew up training with his father to become a Wizard bounty hunter just like his fathers before him. Because he didn't have to spend any time training on making his anti magic stronger, he focused on his swordsmanship and tactics with fighting different kinds of magic. He was a prodigy, quickly mastering his sword he was already bringing home bounties at the early age of 18. 

A few years as a bounty hunter brought him some good money, but he wanted to learn more about his anti magic, and being in a magical guild would and could help him learn how to control it more so. Another reason being he wanted to be apart of something more... 

Personality: Loyal, Charming, Mischievous, Relaxed, Dedicated


Guild and guild mark location: NA Wanting to join Phoenix Wing

Team Members: None

Three Strengths: (Not just combat)
1. Mastery of Swordsmanship
2. Endurance/Sheer will power
3. Brilliant tactician.

Three Weaknesses:
1. His magic can be deadly to him if not careful. (Can loose too much blood)
2. Ranged Magic 
3. Lonely 

Greatest Love: N/A

Motivation: To train and become a master over his ability, 

Appearance: 
[IMG]http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab23/sonofhelaman24/46041ddcddee49e2eed0cce7bf5a708a_zps546d9ac9.jpg[/IMG]

Because of his magic and fighting style, he has countless scars all over his body. 

Additional Details:
His weapon that was handed down to him from his father. It's been in his family for generations.
[IMG]http://www.blackbeltshop.com/images/123515-2-toned-samurai.jpg[/IMG]




meh, sorry it's not really good, a bit out of practice  
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So, my first nitpick is his magic's effect. Admittedly, I get that it's a unique concept, but we literally spent three days picking apart a spell that Technowizard has that essentially does the same thing, though with his eyes rather than his blood. Anyways, I can get the whole cancellation of magic, and can accept it. The issue with the blood part is that you're rather vague on how it does what it does. Does the blood absorb into the body or is there another way it does what it does?

The magic name is odd, and Ex probably has a point in changing it's name, but I'm fairly indifferent to it.

Also, we were in a Final Fantasy RP together run by Lennon79.