Ok, time for some reviews.

[@Lucius Cypher]

Like I said before, your character is pretty much alright. However, I get the feel that he's too medieval inspired, which will make him someone way behind of his times. But, there's something that I must say, he's way too much talented and in ways that are basically way too unrealistic for this kind of narrative.

As far as I can see, he's capable of copying and recalling any sound or text he ever saw with pinpoint precision, which is way too much too give for a single person. So, I have two suggestions regarding this: Either you focus him on a single task (still giving him the unrealistic high skill), or you dial him back to a human level on those things that he can do (even then I still ask you to drop one or two of those skills and make him less spread apart in talents).

Other than this, he's good to me.

[@Conscripts]

Your character is good by my. There's nothing too out of context with him at all, except maybe your choice of terms when describing him/writing your intro. To clarify it, the term "steampunk" splattered on the text draws a bit of the seriousness of the post, pushing it too much to the fantasy side. Instead of using steampunk jacket why not just keep it to jacket alone?

This is just a bit to keep the overall tone of the story even. He's really ok.

[@Faux Fox]

Your character is good as well, but (because of the modern looks of the image you are using) I really have to ask that you at least give us a bit of an idea of how your character is dressed, etc. And probably revise that inventory as well to make it appropriate for their time period.

Otherwise, she's pretty good enough.

Well, that's all I had to say on those characters we have up to now. Please wait for [@TheWindel]'s opinion before posting them on the Character's tab.