Here is a draft version of my character. Tell me if there is anything wrong. 
Edited.

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Name: Edward Terrance

Age: 28

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Character Trait: Technology expert (?)

Character Personality: While in public, he is usually reserved and quiet; while in private he can be outgoing and fun to those he considers family and friends. In combat, he is cold and ruthless to his enemies. 

Character Background: 
Born on Earth, Edward grew up with his parents in one of the few safe cities in the planet. His father was in the military while his mother was a scientist, who specialized in technology; it's from her that Edward got the desire to learn about technology. Upon reaching 18, he volunteer to join the army to follow his father's steps and to strike back at the alien invaders to give mankind back it's future.

He hates aliens in general but those that help humans he gives them the benefit of the doubt and if trustworthy, he will accept them. 

Curio: An old IPhone 3k that runs on solar energy; the same with Bluetooth headset (Just saw Baby Driver, good film) 

Appearance: (An image, if possible). later

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