[@Pirouette] Okay, I gave your sheet a thorough read (I'm a [i]very[/i] fast reader), and there's a few things that come to mind. I'm gonna let Savo and Rune tackle some of the other things they brought up, but I have one big problem with her sheet: To put it simply; it makes little sense for Margaret to be a teacher. Like, personally-wise, she is literally the last option I'd choose for a teaching role. She is described as demented, childish (but also intelligent, but idk), while also having a bloodlust. I just can't buy her as a teacher. [@Kiyran] Galen is p good in my book... I just don't get the connection between pain manipulation and regeneration (The regeneration seems a little tacked on to me, but that's just my opinion). [@wxps350] Your characters are really [s]gay[/s] accepted. They're pretty cool in my book.