[quote=@Surtr] I don't think she's a bad character (well, I think she's a little edgy, but hey), I just don't think being a teacher would be natural for her. I see her as a student brought here to control her bloodlust or weird ghoul powers (which I think are cool, but some of the others have concerns). [/quote] [quote=@Rune_Alchemist] [@Pirouette] Oh boy a character that's going to be Meredith's best friend~ Alright...so teacher. That's cool, and I expect them to be a biiit more powerful since well. [@Surtr] already mentioned her personality, so I'm not going to say anything about it. What I take a bit of an issue with is her ability to create what is essentially zombies. All the other abilities are A-okay to me, but that seems a little...jarring to me. Her ability to basically be a zombie, take hits, and modify her body is already a fairly powerful ability in and of itself, I think. You're basically spawning tough-to-kill bullet sponges that in my opinion could classify as a somewhat powerful entity in its own right. I don't mind the ability in and of itself, but teachers are just supposed to be above average in power. What exactly are the limitations on this ability of hers? A number amount she could control at a time? I think it might just be a bit much to start out with honestly, but if neither of the others have too much of a problem with it I'm not going to say too much else. [/quote] To be fair, she was originally purposed a long time ago to be be a main bad in another RP (and heavily inspired by Tokyo Ghoul and a friend's character). I actually dumped a lot of the physical enhancements to better fit the universe. I could dump more but she is essentially supposed to be this zombie necromancer. I feel I haven't accurately portrayed the personality but she's supposed to be more childish than demented. I mean, it is the side effect of being dead and buried for four years, but the neurosurgeon Margaret is still there and she can [i]at least[/i] appear in control with only slight mad ravings. I mean, yea, she's unconventional for a teaching position, I know that. But sometimes media has those mad brilliant teachers. If it is that much of a stretch, I thought about dumping the bloodlust thing anyway as it doesn't fit much in this universe. That would leave Margaret in control at all times and her character is supposed to a bit manipulative and crafty. If she were tested before applying to Palladium Academy, she would put on the act of being pleasant and maintain that act throughout her tenure. If you still disapprove, I'll nix the rotted mind in exchange for OG Margaret who is more hardworking, studious, and serious. As for the zombies, again, an artifact of being a main bad. I kept it for a little flair but not wholly attached to the idea. To explain it a bit better, though, Margaret has to transplant a bit of her brain to a corpse's brain in order to maintain control. Obviously this takes time and preparation as Margaret pretty much has to do brain surgery on herself. And if Margaret still does not meet approval, I'll forget it and return to working on the student I had planned.