[@Pirouette]

Alright, so... personally, I was hoping to keep the information over who discovered the stuff about genetics being the reason confined to the scientists of Palladium Academy... but eh, I can stretch the lore a bit, so no need to alter that. However, I am curious about a few things.

For starters, why did her powers only manifest after death? It should of manifested from the ages of 5 - 10. If it doesn't manifest during this time, then the child won't have powers, period. If it has to do with the mutagen, then it doesn't make any sense, considering the age when it usually pops up... which meant there was no way. That's the main problem I have with her backstory. If the mutagen changed the gene to the on phase, I prefer if we hold off on technology that allows the gene to go from off to on for now.

Anyways, the other two covered my thoughts on you (but I am glad you actually covered the part where you had her be interviewed due to her bloodlust... also, four years to master her powers? That seems a little strange.), so I'm going to move on for now.

[@Dead Cruiser]

Ok, first, let me say something about the way you formatted the personality section. You used the optional format instead of the required format. So I'm going to ask you to fix that. If you don't know what the proper format is, then here's my characters personality.

[b]Personality:[/b]
[indent]- Caring
- Finicky
- Flirty
- Friendly
- Hardworking
- Perfectionist
- Relaxed
- Self-centered
- Serious
- Stubborn[/indent]

Next, the backstory... so he has essentially evaded being caught as an alien, therefore won't have a handler that watches over him. There is one tiny detail that makes this whole thing fall apart.

"Despite appearing to be some form of pinkish grub in his baby photos..."

People working at ATLAS aren't stupid. And if they knew there was something wrong with him from the get go, they would probably take all precaution since he's an alien. They don't know what they are capable of and would take every step they could to ensure nothing goes wrong I believe. And if he tries the hypnosis stuff on them, they could always call up superpowered humans who have resistance to that sort of thing (i.e. people with mental powers) due to the training they've had over the years. He's also going to need a handler that can handle his hypnosis and other things, so you may want to rework the backstory.

Also, both gms have covered my thoughts on it too. I'll expand on this further in a second.

[@Suku]

You did the same thing as Cruiser with the personality section of your app. Follow my example and write your personality like that please.

Backstory seems fine. I do have one major question though. Are her parents superpowered humans? If not, then they would probably get a visit from one of ATLAS' agents first to discuss this sort of thing instead of getting an invite from Palladium Academy. And I just realized something else that needs to be applied to [b]everyone[/b] as well. She got a letter of invitation explicitly from Palladium Academy.

There are other academy's owned by ATLAS as well, so please take this post into context when saying they received a letter. They probably received letters from the other academy's if you went down this route, so please take this into context. I'll update the lroe to say that there are four other academy's, making the total amount of academy's owned by ATLAS five.

With her powers, is it plausible that with enough willpower/mental fortitude to resist her song? Just asking.

And [@Duoya], I'll get to you in a sec, need to do other things.