Alright, so here are my final reviews for the night because I need to finish my student characters and headmaster npc.

[@Duoya]

Ok, so far, everything seems good... except for the firearm. If he has that with him, he better keep it hidden, otherwise his ass is going to be in a lot of trouble. Like seriously, don't show that to anyone unless you want to be blackmailed or get reported to the authorities on the four islands.

And question on a few things - you mentioned the only thing being able to counter the tendrils strength is someone with strength based powers to counter it. Would using telekinesis be as effective on it? And two more questions - how fast are the tendrils and what are the tendrils made out of?

Like, is it possible to keep an item from being assimilated and is it possible to fight off the tendrils?

[@Suku]

No problems on this end. [@Rune_Alchemist], [Surtr], how does she look?

[@Pirouette]

Alright, with that explanation, everything checks out. Once you alter that, you'll be good in my book. Anything else to add Rune and Allen?
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Did not expect to get these many apps right now, whooo...

For now, I'm going to stop reviewing apps so I can finish my student character. Once I've put the first one up, I'll start reviewing again.