[@TheHangedMan] Er... not without some edits. To put it bluntly, she's far too strong. Being stronger than everyone, tougher than everyone, faster than almost everyone, more skilled than almost everyone, and then having a super-strong attack on top of that... well, something has to give, you can't just have a character that's better than the rest of the cast in pretty much every way. It doesn't go well with a personality of 'self-absorbed asshole' and looks a lot like playing to win rather than RPing.

Also, she's been a magical girl too long, everyone's supposed to be relatively new and not too established. It's mostly a problem because it's been stacked on everything else and just makes things even more overkill. ^^;

... and why have you capitalised the first word of every paragraph? @_@