I like to think of myself as a down to earth guy, so I am gonna be completely level with ya'll.
It is too close for me to call.
I apologize for taking a week to give such a lackluster answer. To be fair, deadbeat is kind of in my name. I wanna give you guys one more day to revise your sheets to make it easier for me to decide. Like an elimination round everybody made it to. If me ghosting for a week and then telling you to revise your sheets for the possibility of still being rejected isn't your jive, which I imagine it cannot be for 100% of you, I totally understand.

Other than that, my advice for all the sheets is about the same; I would like to see the themes of the RP emphasized further in the sheet/history. The whole RP is going to be an emo circlejerk of coming to terms with one's past, so think about your character's past and how it shaped them. I have also included individual critiques in hiders if you want less shitty general advice. Sorry once again for the wait, see you guys tomorrow night.

[hider=Spleen]
I like Lynette because I like characters that you can surmise in a sentence, and Lynette is an albino ex-cop on a motorcycle. Nice. As said above, she's golden if you can beef up a backstory.[/hider]

[hider=Briza]
Bonus points for using a character I have accepted in the past, but negative points for using a character that disappeared in the past. If I accept Eiko over the other applicants, I would like an especially fleshed out backstory for her. Or, you can try to come up with a new character in a day, which is a gamble.[/hider]

[hider=Conscripts]
You have a very solid grasp of the tone, but your character's role is taken by another pilot, and there is a likelihood of someone else taking "Smart guy". I look forward to any reworks, especially considering Weber could be reworked into a veteran easily, though I would also like to see any revisions of him more fleshed out and less two-dimensional[/hider]

[hider=Innis]
I like Sparks, but I feel the themes and worldbuilding could be implemented more fully in her character. She is the only applicant from Mars, for example, but seems pretty not-Japanese, which is never brought up. Also, there is another engineer on the accepted characters, which seems to be integral to her character. I'd like it if you could emphasize her themes/history and change her profession.[/hider]