[@6slyboy6] Sorry, I seemed to have misinterpreted the context or intent of what the first post was supposed to be. My first post was intended to be an elaboration on the what we talked about regarding my race's origin story, and was intended as a teaser lead-up to my race losing their home world. I thought it best to just start from the absolute very beginning of the scenario as outlined in the OOC first post, and introduce my race as a character, rather than try to In-medias Res well... everything. 

I fixed it by making it happen in the past. The post I've worked all day on should better reflect both your expectations, and the environment that it is in. I spent a lot of time going over the early posts of the thread to get a better feel for what was expected and where our races are at in their development.