[@checkeredsoul]

Alright, after reading over it...a couple of things.

First issue is that power. I'm going to go ahead and knock this out of the way before the rest of the CS.

Power Mimcry? Yeah, That's going to be a straight up veto by itself. No power mimicry is going to be allowed, since it's sort of...would be incredibly difficult, if not impossible in this setting. Maybe through a conduit, but even then...not exactly something we'd just let anyone have since the potential for OPness is quite high. 

Even if we were to accept the ability itself (which we're most likely not), you'd need much more than a single line describing it. Especially in the weakness section. Touching someone and copying their ability isn't much of a weakness. It's a lot easier to do then one might think. As for being able to hold only one...well, yeah. That's about par for the course I'd imagine.

Secondly, as Rice has said the personality format isn't right. While a single paragraph is fine, [@Savo] wants a list of notable traits from your character. They don't have to be one word descriptors, but try to keep them to a few words. I would suggest at least five or six, and a paragraph (only a paragraph) following it if you feel the need to explain a few things that may seem contradictory.

Example from one of my characters:
[quote=@Rune_Alchemist]
- Slow to trust
- Shy when meeting new people
- Cheerful
- Reserved
- Methodical
- Slow to act
- Intelligent
- Gluttonous
- Somewhat 'out there'
- Spontaneous
- Mischievous
- Doesn't like conflict
[/quote]

Lastly, I would really suggest a picture. It would at least help us, a little.

TL;DR
try and come up with a different superpower, follow the personality format, and make sure you at least describe your characters abilities more than with a single sentence. We don't expect you to be able to cover all the weaknesses in the CS, but at least do try and not be vague about what it can/can't do. A little more detail in the appearance section would help as well.