[@Ryteb Pymeroce]

[hider=Review of Blake Hunter]
I would like for you to describe his appearance a bit more. You haven't actually described much about his build and you mentioned nothing of his facial features, other than the fact that he looks older than he is. Johnny Depp and Brad Pitt are both in their fifties, but they still look good (according to societal standards), while others were not dealt as lucky a hand when it comes to genetics.

I'd like a bit more history on him, too. Specifically, how he got into archeology and why he made searching for the lost city of Muntab his life's goal. More stuff would be nice, too, but that's what I need the most.

Could you be a bit more specific with his clothing? Like, what type of shit is it? Does it have long or short sleeves? How many pockets do the pants have? Are the boots lace-up or zipper?
The same goes for his possessions. What arms are in the knife (scissors, saw, screwdriver, ect.)? Is the book paperback, hard cover or leather bound? He has a pistol, but no bullets? Also, where does he keep these things?

That's all I can find. I like the concept of your character. I was actaully going for a more "realistic" type of characters, but I get really feel that "zing" here that makes me intrigued.
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[@luckofthedraw]

[hider=Review of Jerry Mordock]
The history could use a bit of beefing up, but it is not really a necessity.

You need to describe his appearance a bit more. Like his facial features.

For his clothes; does he wear anything under the [i]waist[/i] coat and blazer? Does he go bare feet?

Where does he keep all of these things?

Other than those minor details, he's good. Nice concept and all.
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My own character will be up sometime within the next 24 hours, so you can wait for that and use her as a sort of reference, if you want to.