[@omni023]

Hey! Thanks for taking the time to submit an application. I'm impressed at how far you've gone into your research for your character's lineage, and you clearly have a good grasp of the source material; but I'm afraid that your writing isn't quite up to standard for an advanced roleplay. We do need a higher level of english, but being new to the guild, you certainly weren't to know that. All I can say is I wish you the best of luck in the future, and hope you find some awesome roleplays that you can be part of. :)