[quote=@DarkRecon] Hi all. Sorry for disappearing on you all but I was busy with offline stuff. My bad. I'm still working on the character i wanted to use but...not sure how to set it up. So here's what I have so far: Character Name: Robin Title: [color=red][b]Legend[/b][/color] [color=yellow][b](This character is not a legend.)[/b][/color](Also called "The Tatician" and sometimes "High Deliverer" or "Mystery Tatician".) Kingdom: Nintendo (Though "Intelligent Systems" was the designer, Nintendo published it.) Visual Description: [img]https://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/p__/images/2/2e/Fire_Emblem_robin_7568.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20150928013828&path-prefix=protagonist[/img] Written Description: Stands around 5'9" or so. He also has a hidden pocket inside his cloak to hold an extra tome and sword. Personality: Very friendly. Also percetive to a point that he can gauge another persons feelings through conversation due to his tatical mindset. This Robin in particular is self-sacrificing, always putting his health on the line for the sake of others. Game: Fire Emblem Awakening Current Story: There are perhaps several timelines as to where this Robin in particular belongs to. While there are key differences in such timelines, it seems all the Robins have something in common. They defy destiny. Even when he or she had found out about his or her lost memories and their past before meeting Chrom, Robin still fought on alongside him and the Sheperds. While he refuses to reveal his decisions in his timeline, such as his wife and children, he will admit to this. He himself dealt the final blow that should have killed both Grima, the dark dragon, and himself. Slowly disappearing, Robin thanked everyone and said his goodbyes as he faded from existance...but fate itself had something else in stored for him. Instead of the gates of heaven or the fires of hell, he instead found himself inside Platform City, summoned there at Tetris castle during his supposed final moments of his life. At first, Robin was shocked. Sure, he had traveled through the Dragon's Gate of his world and had seen his fair share of weirdness but all that pale in comparision to the wonderous place he had arrived in. Even more shocking was the fact that no one there could figure out why or how he had gotten there to begin with. Even more strange, he had somehow gained the memories of those he supposdly "fought" against in the fourth smash tournament even though he claims he has no recognition of doing so. After some time, Robin had settled into his new surroundings. Even finding many books on the other worlds out there to read up on. When he also found out about the "team" that was put together should anything threaten other universes outside it's own, he decided to lend his tatical genius to the cause. At some point, Robin was able to return to his timeline, right on the same grassy plain where Chrom and Lissa found him the first time though now without the mark of Grima on the back of his right hand. Though he didn't tell them nor his family about his stay at Platrom City. Then one day, Robin's skills were requested through a letter from Platform City. Leaving a note to his family at their home, Robin immedately left for the Dragon's Gate. There, the "Anna" in charge of the gate made sure he was sent to the right spot for his journey... Weapon(s): (What you will put here is the weapon or weapons your character has initially. Like, level 1, start of their respective game. Any other weapons will be acquired in game or as a level up.) Stat. Level One You have 5 stat points to distribute how you like. (P)Damage 1 (P)Defense 1 (M)(E)Damage 1 (M)(E)Defense 1 Dexterity 1 0% (This is critical damage. Everyone starts at 0%.) XP ////////// (0/10) Squad: (Alpha, Bravo, Charlie, or Delta) [color=red][b]Alpha[/b][/color] General Abilities Slot One. Special Abilities Slot One. Items Slot One. Slot Two. Slot Three. Strengths Weaknesses Achievements * * * * * * * * * * So what do you all think so far? Thoughts and suggestions? [/quote] You need to fill out the sheet. The current story is fine but you haven't really done anything with the CS besides writing that. I made corrections in red.