[@babbysama] Awesome character! Glad to have our first Rohirric character! I'll just need you to make a few changes. Firstly, you've mentioned Mirkwood and Dôr-min-Taur as being in Beleriand, which will need editing. Secondly, it's more to do with your character's backstory. The people of Eorl were described as "...true-hearted, generous in thought and deed; bold but not cruel...". This to me makes me think they wouldn't hold a grudge against an entire line for what one of their ancestors may have done; and they certainly wouldn't have been involved with slavery, even keeping in line with weregild. If you've found a source that says contrary to what I believe, then fair enough - but otherwise, you'll have to change it. Perhaps turn the contempt of everyone into two specific family's that hate one another? Constantly battling, in competition, etc. This seems to be a more likely occurrence than everyone disliking the family because of a falling out with a dead King long ago. The slavery however, can't stay. Other than that, he's wonderful! Once you make your changes, I'll be looking forward to seeing him in the IC. :)