[@beyond visions] I don't necessarily want the thing to end. I think the World building could easily be fixed because we have just barely begun. I do think that too many collabs in a role-play make it hard to follow for people not involved in them. And they can become very jumbled and confusing if they're not edited. Honestly the spell check is just personal immersion for me. If it's something easy to miss it wouldn't even bother me. I don't look for errors. If there's a missing comma, You won't hear a word from me. 

If you as the GM personally don't know where to take your story from here then we can either brainstorm together or if you really don't feel that this can go anywhere I guess we can end it. I'm on vacation so like I said I'm not going to be posting a whole lot this week.