[@Write][@Lord Zee] I've worked through alot of sheets today with Melo so I hope you will forgive me. I'll be getting to Persephone and Thran tommorrow evening. You are by no means forgotten, I have some stuff I have to set up tonight for some irl stuff and it's currently midnight where I am.

But I promise your characters are the first things I will get to when I get home tommorrow :D

[@13org] You already know but for the sake of propriety, Nanna's accepted :D

[@Aewin] That was entirely my bad, The Bellcairn info should be up <3 Three simple illusions is perfect.

[@MiddleEarthRoze] that makes alot more sense! It can definitely wipe away entire bays and stuff like that. I think the wording just caught me offguard :D 

Honestly with that clarification it's fine as is, we might even want to buff if a touch now. Since you're dying to use it (literally! :D) it can be more powerful then a regular tsunami :3 I'm very sorry for the confusion on my part. 

Unless you want to switch your ultimate ability for boil and toil, in which case we can do something with that :D 

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Fish are Friends: Since this calls fish rather then summon them you can leave it as is. Though a tiger-shark could potentially be an insta-kill for this slot, so there will probably be rolls involved when using to control the larger beasts.

Call For Help: Same as above, dice will probably determine what the Merfolk do and how many arrive (between 1 and 3, likely, depending on the area)

Cataclysm: You can probably buff this for inland use. Something like:

If inland, Lorena can use this ability by summoning the ocean itself through her connection to it. it dissipates after Lorena's death.

You can reword it better though :D

You could also choose to remain an area underwater/flooded if you like. That would definitely be pretty interesting in future eras, but that's up to you :D[/hider]

Let me know what you think and then I can probably accept Lorena after this set of changes :D

[@McHaggis] add Dryden up to the CS tab :D! and yeah, considering the slot you put Displaced in I thought 600 meters would be pretty good :3 And I think Greed is a very appropriate domain to add.  

[@luckofthedraw] are you sure you don't want to buff absolute nothingness to include an effect on other immortals or a stronger effect on the surrounding landscape? 

[@Dusksong] Sorry Dusksong, me and Melo have been doing a bit of rebalancing so there will be a few changes to work through. Of course if you want to move things about to keep certain abilities at their current power levels we can do that :D

[hider=The Morrigan]
Shapeshifting at a first level ability is really potent, that'd be a high-moderate level ability now. You could do something like:

The Morrigan is able to look through the eyes of a raven or wolf to aid her.

For the illusionist:
At the second potency of the weakest ability this is pretty powerful as you can create any type of illusion (compared to Noora's highest potency weakest ability for example, that can create specifically weak illusions of herself) 

so you could do something like:

The Morrigan is able to make convincing illusions of small trinkets, coins, anything that can fit in the palm of the hand.

or if you want it still to be an illusion self-based ability:

The Morrigan can appear as a beautiful maiden or old crone to one person in her vicinity. If she uses this ability on another person nearby, the other person snaps out of it. This ability can last up to ten minutes at a time. 

The Prophetess:The Morrigan can receive a cryptic hint of a flash into someone's future.[/hider]
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Make Way for the Father: Kenzie shrouds the sight of people in an area around himself with a diameter of ten ft for up to ten minutes. Kenzie himself is unaffected by the darkness. 

The Vices of Humanity:  From the union of Aether and Gaia came many of humanity’s banes, including “Grief, Deceit, Wrath, Lamentation, Falsehood, Oath, Vengeance, Intemperance, Altercation, Forgetfulness, Sloth, Fear, Pride, Incest, and Combat.” Kenzie can cause another person to be affected by the vice they are most susceptible to. A person can only be susceptible to one vice at a time and up to the duration of forty-five minutes. 

The Furies: Aether’s union with Gaia also produced the three furies, and Kenzie’s connection to Aether allows him to call upon the three sisters to do his bidding. However, because he is but a human, Kenzie can only supply enough energy to summon one sister at a time. Kenzie can summon a furie in their incoporeal form for twelve hours or their corporeal form for four hours. The incorporeal form cannot deal damage or be killed. The corporeal form can be destroyed just like all other flesh-and-bone beings, allowing them to be defeated in battle.  The Erinyes are crones described as having snakes for hair, dog's heads, coal black bodies, bat's wings, and blood-shot eyes. In their hands they carry brass-studded scourges, and their victims die in torment. They will chase their victims to the ends of the earth if need be.

The Elements: Switch with the 3:1 position and pick one element to manipulate.

Breath of Life: Just letting you know the cost of this will be reduced when we hand out costs :D

Final ability: Just a stipend saying that the effect will decrease over the three eras (so in the third era it won't be as powerful, for example)

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[@Apokalipse] ohmygosh that picture is beyond perfect <3

[@Write] 
[hider=Faela]Decree: Fæla can order a creature of lesser intelligence, like an animal, to take a simple action that they must complete if physically possible. Technically speaking, if it is something that someone would typically do, it could work on them. Small children may also be susceptible. If the command can no longer be completed or there is substantial risk to the creature/child, the hold on the creature or child is broken. The decree will wear off naturally after a period of time.

A note on the time it lasts: We'll take it as a case by case basis, since there are alot of ways to use the ability :D (e.g. you may order a wolf to howl at a certain time, this would be treated differently from someone being chased by a wolf for a long period of time)

Grand Jury: Fæla can create a permanent telepathic link between a group of up to six people. It works similarly to speaking, one must choose to communicate through this method, but you cannot choose not to hear someone speaking through this method. 

Cross Examination: Honestly this ability is more of a moderate ability then a strong ability. Perhaps you'd like to switch this with your second or third moderate ability slots to make one of them more powerful? Or you can buff this ability :D Me and [@Melo] can help you out with that if you're unsure. 

One alternative you could have that Melo suggested is:

Fæla is able to activate this ability, which will summon her two knights to her side. She may ask two questions and be told the absolute truth to each. The knights, if telling the truth will give an in depth answer.

Oh and, unlikely to be important since you mentioned the physics thing but due to magic being around: No granting immortality with the ulti <3 I don't think you would anyway, but, better to have stated it somewhere now XD

Let us know what you think and we'll go from there :D
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[@Filthy Mudblood] love the new appearance <3

There will be options for previous players to keep some of their key relationships if they still want to explore them. 

[hider=Valerie]
Small adjustment

Laughter inducement: remove the part about choking and add something along the lines of "strong pain can snap a person out of the effect"

after you make that change feel free to add her up :D [/hider]
[@ihinka]
[hider=Tlalli] Can you adjust the wording of this part:

"This image was, in fact, Tlalli's curse mark and with each use of her abilities the colors would become clearer and clearer as if a new tattoo layer is being added in. Each time the pain would be stronger and stronger. Vicious, debilitating, sickening."

To make it clear if the pain is happening to her through her curse mark? And also if the pain is continuous or not or just when the tattoo is adjusting itself.

Can you mention in Huitzilipochtli's formative moments how she ended up becoming a human? What the Dark Gods did to trick her or influence her after she found her Starkissed to trap her in a mortal body.

So happy to see astronomy in a character's skills ;D 

I'm interpretting her ruthlessness as a survival skill that helps her push forward in the face of adversity, is that correct?

Can you clarify what this ability does a bit more, I'm having problems imagining the end effect:
Honor Guides Me In a clash between adversaries Huitzilipochtli will stand by the side of the honorable one and will extend her guidance to her charge in the moment of most dire need. 

My Honor Is My Shield: With this ability Huitzilipochtli can deflect a single moderate or weak physical attack from one source,  the physical attack deflected cannot be fatal or maiming in nature.  This cannot be used on the same person for another twenty minutes. 

Your Burden Shall Be Mine: Can you specify a little bit more, do you mean when a person makes a selfless act towards another, Huitzilipochtli removes any suffering related to that?

Know The Joy Of Sacrifice Huitzilipochtli: Is this just a joy increase or does it boost people's awareness/senses as well?

Really like The Gift of Sense :D

Healing Gift - you'll probably get a buff to this once all characters are in (so I can better compare the heals that people have in this slot so it's a good balance for the cost) but don't worry about that for now.

My Life For Yours: Is this her life for another person's or is she ressing one person by killing another?
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[@Write]
[hider=Gaia]Akua's picture <3 

Champion: this needs to be seperated into two. Champion with a social effect is a general skill and  archery is a combat skill.

I know you've already defined it, but can you please seperate animal mastery into Hunting and Animal Handling, even if you just put Hunting: See above, soothes beasts during hunting or something. This helps me streamline stuff during the roleplay.

Amazonian: Again this is both peak physical strength and pugilism in one, please pick which.

Touch of Earth: Um. This is just a really powerful version of Faela's Decree ability xD This is currently too strong to have in this slot, more likely a moderate ability (you gain infinite control over any animals. So there needs to be a size limit, limit to the sort of commands you can give, limit to the amount of control ect. If you see decree which is a similar power slot, it is the one command if it is possible to complete without danger.) So anyway, either move it to your moderate slots or we can decrease it's power substantially. 

Life's Kiss: Nothing beyond a light wound for a weak ability slot.

Breath of the Wild: Not fire immune or extreme sub-zero temperatures, please keep that in mind :D

Refulgent Creation: Gaia can summon to her side up to three animals that are native to the area she is in. She does this by imbuing her life force into the area she in and the beings are created. These animals are loyal to Gaia and can follow basic commands.

Cain: Remembering the moment she felt betrayal for the first time, Gaia whispers a phrase into the ear of a target. That person will then distrust whosoever was named. A full name is required and while they will deeply distrust that person, what happens afterwards is left completely up to whoever is affected by this ability. They cannot immediately shake off their distrust, however.

Burden of the Daughter: I just want to confirm you can't then swing a burden with infinite strength or use it as a weapon against another? also an ammendment, please add that anything thrown with this strength will immediately drop.

Tears of the Mother: Using this ability Gaia's tears can bring forth entire lake's worth of water. As soon as the tear hits the ground it expands rapidly creating an entire lakebed. Anyone caught within this radius is under immense threat of being dragged beneath the surface by the ensuing rapid filling of the lake and thrown about by the current.

Soul of the Creator: First part might be my favourite ultimate so far <3
Just to confirm: the 200 ft diameter lethality is just the size of the tree roots part, and the forest is alot bigger then that? As a 200ft forest isn't very big for a forest of that majesty :D [/hider]

Vatten Clan [@MiddleEarthRoze] What colour shall I set the Vatten Clan to?

Ursidae [@McHaggis][@Apokalipse] I was gonna put Ursidae north of the Roamwyns, does that sound about right or do you imagine them further south (or perhaps out east/west on par with another clan, let me know) I was going to show their migration north which probably goes all the way up past Wolfrahg and Craenak.