[@Mae] As far as Persephone goes, I'm always willing to wait on you guys so don't worry about it. Okay so let's start with Faela our favourite 'we need to edit that' sheet. [hider=Faela] Decree: Fæla can order a creature of lesser intelligence, like an animal, to take a simple action that they must complete if physically possible. Technically speaking, if it is something that someone would typically do, it could work on them. Small children may also be susceptible. If the command can no longer be completed or there is substantial risk to the creature/child, the hold on the creature or child is broken. The decree will wear off naturally after a period of time. [i][b]This was pasted onto the ability.[/b][/i] A note on the time it lasts: We'll take it as a case by case basis, since there are alot of ways to use the ability :D (e.g. you may order a wolf to howl at a certain time, this would be treated differently from someone being chased by a wolf for a long period of time) [i][b]Totally agree[/b][/i] Grand Jury: Fæla can create a permanent telepathic link between a group of up to six people. It works similarly to speaking, one must choose to communicate through this method, but you cannot choose not to hear someone speaking through this method. [i] [b]Pasted onto the ability.[/b][/i] Cross Examination: Honestly this ability is more of a moderate ability then a strong ability. Perhaps you'd like to switch this with your second or third moderate ability slots to make one of them more powerful? Or you can buff this ability :D Me and @Melo can help you out with that if you're unsure. [i][b]So this and Desposition were swapped out making this my 7 I believe, maybe my 6 actually. Regardless I'll wait on your and [@Melo]'s advice on how or what to buff in Desposition.[/b][/i] Oh and, unlikely to be important since you mentioned the physics thing but due to magic being around: No granting immortality with the ulti <3 I don't think you would anyway, but, better to have stated it somewhere now XD [i][b]That won't stop me from making someone think they're immortal! ;D [/b][/i] [/hider] [hider=Gaia] Akua's picture <3 [b][i]I freaked out about how perfect it was when I found it![/i][/b] Champion: this needs to be seperated into two. Champion with a social effect is a general skill and archery is a combat skill. [i][b]Done and done. In that I moved the sway she has in the clan over to charisma because it doesn't actually change what her charisma skill is, just provides another reason for her to be so. So yeah this is done. [/b][/i] I know you've already defined it, but can you please seperate animal mastery into Hunting and Animal Handling, even if you just put Hunting: See above, soothes beasts during hunting or something. This helps me streamline stuff during the roleplay. [i][b]Also done.[/b][/i] Amazonian: Again this is both peak physical strength and pugilism in one, please pick which. [i][b][b]Pugilism is gone.[/b][/b][/i] Touch of Earth: Um. This is just a really powerful version of Faela's Decree ability xD This is currently too strong to have in this slot, more likely a moderate ability (you gain infinite control over any animals. So there needs to be a size limit, limit to the sort of commands you can give, limit to the amount of control ect. If you see decree which is a similar power slot, it is the one command if it is possible to complete without danger.) So anyway, either move it to your moderate slots or we can decrease it's power substantially. [i][b]Fully changed what this ability does, please advise on whether that's cool or nah.[/b][/i] Life's Kiss: Nothing beyond a light wound for a weak ability slot. [i][b]Fixed it right up.[/b][/i] Breath of the Wil d: Not fire immune or extreme sub-zero temperatures, please keep that in mind :D [i][b]added that in![/b][/i] Refulgent Creation: Gaia can summon to her side up to three animals that are native to the area she is in. She does this by imbuing her life force into the area she in and the beings are created. These animals are loyal to Gaia and can follow basic commands. [i][b]Pasted over the ability[/b][/i] Cain: Remembering the moment she felt betrayal for the first time, Gaia whispers a phrase into the ear of a target. That person will then distrust whosoever was named. A full name is required and while they will deeply distrust that person, what happens afterwards is left completely up to whoever is affected by this ability. They cannot immediately shake off their distrust, however. [i][b]Pasted over the ability[/b][/i] Burden of the Daughter: I just want to confirm you can't then swing a burden with infinite strength or use it as a weapon against another? also an ammendment, please add that anything thrown with this strength will immediately drop. [i][b]Believe I clarified much more what this ability does now, so we should be good. But all of this stuff that you wanted to confirm is correct.[/b] [/i] Tears of the Mother: Using this ability Gaia's tears can bring forth entire lake's worth of water. As soon as the tear hits the ground it expands rapidly creating an entire lakebed. Anyone caught within this radius is under immense threat of being dragged beneath the surface by the ensuing rapid filling of the lake and thrown about by the current. [i] [b]Pasted over the ability[/b][/i] Soul of the Creator: First part might be my favourite ultimate so far <3 Just to confirm: the 200 ft diameter lethality is just the size of the tree roots part, and the forest is alot bigger then that? As a 200ft forest isn't very big for a forest of that majesty :D [i][b] Thank you!!!! Also yeah cleared that up. While the lethal range is only 200 metres, the forest can grow up to 100 acres.[/b][/i][/hider] Phew, can't wait to hear about Persephone and hear back from anything I might've messed up. My responses are all in italics!