[quote=@Gcold]

[@Kingfisher]: Delilah has a couple of cool features going for her. A big girl like her moving up the underworld ranks is always fun to see. However, I have several adjustments for you to make. First is weight; 20 stones is fine in colloquial Irish English, but I need a metric and/or imperial measurement to make it consistent with everyone else. Second is the Chief's connection to the Chatterjee Outfit. What were the details of this crime partnership across the world? Lastly, her personality seems to conflict a bit. Her bio says she treats the prostitutes "more like people than product", while her outlook states that "she views each individual person as something to exploit". I need you to clarify these three points before getting into the game.

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Thanks for the detailed feedback man, I really appreciate it. 

20 stone to lb is 280 pounds, so that's an easy fix for me. I'll do that now. 

The Chief is supposed to be someone whose always trying to make new connections, and his deal with the Chatterjee Outfit was intended to be his first opportunity to try and branch out to India. I can add a reference to that into the bio if you'd like?

As for the personality section, it was supposed to be that Delilah is someone who acts humane when she has the luxury to, but can easily shed her disguise of caring at the drop of a hat, if it means she'll benefit. Sorry if that wasn't conveyed in the way I'd worded things. 

I can make those changes asap, if that's all?