[quote=@Claw2k11]
Sorry if it's kinda poor, my creativity took a nose-dive today for whatever reason.

[hider=Arrak the Burner]

[hider=Orcish Form][img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/09/16/ed/0916edcebb0a8bdfff59b3e3aaee56d5.jpg[/img][/hider]


[hider=Half-Dragon Form][img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/fd/f8/77/fdf8779fd30571bcd018f519d026a59b.jpg[/img][/hider]


[hider=Dragon Form][img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/5c/55/47/5c55474ef80aa486a9b7d2aa7c5bd0ef.jpg[/img][/hider]

[b]Name[/b]: Arrak the Burner

[b]Sex[/b]: Male

[b]Race[/b]: 

Dragon- Though he was not born a dragon, but a half-dragon, half-orc, the Dark God Grimnos chose him as the champion of the Dark Gods and turned him into a fully fledged dragon and now he has three forms, his pure orcish form, his half-dragon form and his full dragon form. Despite all these, he knows is a fully fledged dragon.

[b]Age[/b]: 34

[b]Religion[/b]: 

Grimnos- patron deity of tyranny, war and strategy.
Afgur the Blood King- patron deity of anarchy, destruction and bloodshed(he follows only the latter of the two for Afgur)

[b]Backstory[/b]:

Arrak was born 34 years ago, by two parents who did not seem to want him as they simply left him in the forests as a baby and though could have been the end of him, a large group of orcish raiders found the little half-orc/half-dragon baby and for whatever, instead of putting it out of it's misery, they decided to raise him as some sort of mascot of theirs, of course he would still take part in raids as such as soon as he could hold a weapon in his hand for more than 3 seconds.

And Arrak seemed to thrive with a such a job, mostly helped by his half-dragon from, which made him much more deadly than a regular orc. And as the years passed, the less his raiders treated him like a mascot and more like a comrade, resulting by the time he reached 20 years of age for the raiders to treat him like a brother both in combat and outside it, this was the closest that Arrak had come to have a true family.

However, for Arrak, life was becoming mundane with most days being the same, either they did nothing, or launched the occasional raid on a defenseless village with nobody to oppose them, it had become quite boring. And though he loved everyone, including their chief, as brothers, he decided that there needed to be a change in leadership in their raiding clan and so, he challenged the chief of his clan to a duel. The chief may have been quite old, but he was still one of the strongest orcs in this raiding clan, so the fight would not be easy... or so everyone else thought.

The duel lasted less than half a minute. The chief charged towards Arrak, but Arrak did not move one finger, instead, he opened his maw and breathed flames on the chief, burning him to ashes in only a few seconds. For a few moments, the onlookers were mute, they stared at what was supposed to have been a duel in disbelief... then they all roared in support of their new chief, Arrak the Burner.

Though soon, it was proven that Arrak would have deserved the nickname of Arrak the Savage for the boldness and the savagery of his attacks. Nobody would be spared from his bloody raids, humans, elves, samothaurs or even orcs, all of them suffered the same fate. A few special ones would be given the option to either die or join them in their bloody raids on everyone else and as one could imagine that did not sit well with a lot of people... or rather with anyone for that matter.

However his raids did not attract the attention of only mortal beings, but of a few certain immortal ones as well, though not ones one might like to interact to. Two figures appeared before him in a vision, one of the figures was a large one, clad in a imposing armor and with a stern look on his face. The other figure was something entirely different, it was barbarian stained with blood and with a large and cruel grin.

Both started speaking to him, both promised him great powers, powers that would make unmatched in combat, but the power that attracted him most was the one to be capable of turning into a dragon at will. Both of them said that there would be consequences if he accepted these gifts they offered him, but he did not care for any consequences, as long as he could take the world and have everyone bow before him, it was good and if anyone would defy him... he would butcher him.

The dark gods offered him one last piece of info, the one being that might threaten his domination a dragon, a dragon named Htraknu and with that, his vision ended. Arrak grinned, he had become powerful, more powerful than any mortal could ever dream to be, now he could bring the world under his heel... however, he still had a certain... dragon that threatened his rule.

[b]Motivation[/b]:

The Dark Gods told him that Htraknu was one of his obstacles, one of the obstacles that would prevent him from asserting his dominance upon this world and that was reason enough for him to overthrow this prideful being even if it meant that he had to team up with other lesser beings in order to do so.

[b]Magic[/b]:

Dragonflame: As a true dragon now, he can with ease breathe flames that are capable of melting even metal.

Conjure Armor: Though rather a odd spell, this spell allows him to conjure himself a set of plate armor for a few hours to protect himself from any enemy attacks.

[b]Skills/Strengths[/b]:

Blessing of the Body: Arrak is very strong physically, even for an orc and with the strength he received from Afgur as a blessing, he is even more so, much over most humans, elves or most orcs.

Blessing of the Mind: While Afgur blessed his body, Grimnos on the other hand blessed his mind, making him something of a charismatic genius.

[b]Weaknesses[/b]: 

If dragons were considered to be prideful and egotistic, then they have nothing on Arrak, upon receiving his gifts from the Dark Gods, he became very prideful, thinking the world deserves to bow before him. This has not earned him many friends outside of his raider band.

[b]Gear[/b]: Other than the sword of the previous chieftan(in his orc form picture) he has nothing with him as any actual armor would be lost upon transformation.

[b]Other[/b]: Nope, nothing here.

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Couple issues. First of all, the dark deities of the Felridgean pantheon don't always get along (Grimnos and Afgur kinda hate each other), so Grimnos would give Arrak dragon powers as a champion of Grimnos rather than all seven of the major dark deities. Secondly, either in weaknesses or other, you should write "unspecified consequences for his blessings" as this WILL come back to bite you. This is a powerful character and there is always a price to pay for that. Other than that, there are a few problems with wording and grammar but nothing that can't be edited.